Visiting the writing center was helpful. The teacher skimmed my paper and made suggestions for the body and writing. Below is a list of the suggestions:
- Put whole paper in past tense. (did take advise)
- Make more distinct connections between the physical description of and characteristics of animal and why it was worshiped. (did take advise)
- Add that the Eagle was also chosen as our nations bird. (did not take advise because paper focuses more on ancient cultures rather than today - could be a good connection to make of past to present in presentation though).
- Edit thesis - include a statement saying that the cultures valued the traits of the animals (did take advise).
- Talk about other animals and their traits (did not take advise - I was worried that I would get too far off on a tangent and lose track of the paper).
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